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Leave Me Alone

There seems to be something
Wrong with me
It seems as if
I have lost my mind
My friends and family
Console me explaining I haven't
But I know these voices
Aren't supposed to be there
I don't feel crazy
Just out of place
Not long ago
I was normal
Now I have all these thoughts
Floating, racing, confusing me
My friends joke around
About being insane
But what they don't know
Technically I have
Had psychosis
The voices talk to me
Never nicely
I feel like a frightened little child
The paranoia
Encircling my brain until
I do something I regret
Going insane with my thoughts
I just want them to leave me alone!

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These are indeed my true feelings

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  • penman gold member
    June 21, 2007

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    Wow!

    Now this is definitely shouting at the reader with intensity. Really is powerful. Sad though it is how you feel. At least you were honest and that is a good thing.


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    June 16, 2007
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    oh hun!
    This is really sad and dark!
    Hope this goes away soon!

    Nooni