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I kiss your feet Ma

Black eye sues -

Deeply bright, golden

Crowning a black abyss -

My Queen, so divine, I love her.

On my knees

Tears flowing freely -

freshly drying sheets billowing in the summer's gale -

I weep.

I cry out

Sound bursting from my chest!

Long ago captured -

I sob.

On my knees

I raise my hands - palm to palm

Above my head....

Gasping, Crying, Laughing, Sobs

I am so grateful.

I am so grateful.

I finally get it.



Silence danced so long -

A burning candle flickering in the wind -

It's my turn now

To give graditude

and live.....

Author notes

Billy Joe, I share theses words with you. With one hard given advice. Cry. Feel thoes feelings. It's okay, and it feel better. You feel alone, abandoned, chetted, raw, and like no one gets it. Been there Am still going through it. But theses are the words that came to me after I cried, after I sobs so hard into laughter and mournful joy. She gave you a gift in more ways then one, and in time you will see it too.
No, i'm sorries from me because I wanted to kill the next person that said that to me, so I'll spare you. But know this, my energy greets yours and embraces you with love for who you are and will become.
Namaste brother.

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  • Tears from within
    June 17, 2007
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    Wow thank you so much for entering my conest. Your poem is so beautiful and wonderfully written and I know that Billy Joe will absolutely love it! The advice that you gave aswell thats the best that anyone can give him and it made me cry, thank you so much and bless your heart. God be with you and Good Luck in the contest!