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**Drops of Love**

Like fresh drops of rain
falling upon my weary soul
releasing the tension..I feel myself let totally, go

Like the first dew drops upon the morning rose
the sun comes out once again ,from hiding behind the beautiful rain clouds..Off in the distance I hear the sound of thunder..I see the flashes of lightening begin.

I feel the drops.
touch my skin..
My soul is refreshed
by the slowly fallen drops
of heaven's bliss

Awakening drops
falling slowly to the ground
Landing, and carassing the heads of freshly open flowers
Quenching their thirst
It almost seems God, is feeding them with his own cupped hands.

Again the miracle of growth ,and life
are noticed, and held
Tightly,
Unconditionally,
By his everlasting love.

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  • Samplette gold member
    June 20, 2007
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    This is a nice write...not really for this contest, but thank you for sharing.
    Sam


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 18, 2007

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    What I lovely description of a light rain.
    I like the rain also, because I have a large garden, and would prefer for God to do the watering. Rain keeps the earth green, so ,though I love sunny days, I am grateful to watch the rain.


  • James R
    June 17, 2007

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    Very nice write my friend I just love the rain listening to it or watch en in in the comfort of my own home I hate it wen I am court out in it however. Beautiful write my friend