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Why I love you

I love you because
Your smile is radiant
You brighten my day
Each moment I look at you

I love you because
You're like rain
Once you land
Prospering can begin

I love you because
You're like a blanket
Keeping me warm
When chills invade me

I love you because
You're the beat of my heart
Every beat produces-
Opportunities for us to share

Author notes

This came to last night after I listen to the song, 'Always and Forever' such a romantic song, so passionate about the feelings of love... inspiration is one of God's greatest gifts...

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  • NurseChilly gold member
    June 17, 2007
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    tis a romantic song indeed

    nicely done Curtis... a soft piece with lots of heart


  • nell
    June 15, 2007

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    love is the inspiration for many things created in this world and here it has caused you to pen an absolutely beautiful poem... nicely done hun.

    Shanelle
    Who sings this song??


  • smiley
    June 15, 2007

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    first off, Always and Forever is my ultimate love song of ever...when I get married again it will be the first song played.. Secondly this poem is soooooooo beautiful it brought tears to my eyes.. What an inspiration... Love alone is always a good reason to write. Then you place God behind your reasoning oh my what a wonderful reason to write more.

    Yvonne