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**Temptations Of Loneliness**


Wondrous Love
Timeless encounters
Wondering eyes
Cast their spell
Speaking, as if directly
to my own, lonely soul


Casting the spell of deceit.
Is it worth it?
For a moment of feeling loved, and complete

Wondrous Love
Letting you go.
Capturing loneliness, I'll still behold.


Yet, I'm still ~ guilt free.
This My Love , means way more to me.


Betty Rickard
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June 14, 2007

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 20, 2007

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    "Yet, I'm still ~ guilt free.
    This My Love , means way more to me."

    Fidelity is of utmost importance, which you have stressed here. I sense your struggle and sadness in this verse.
    Well written.