Tattered Scorn ripped and torn
My heart torn into pieces like many times before
How do I feel
I dont know
Everything mixed up
Twisted together
In whats left of a broken heart
Author notes
ok i dont know im trying to tell my boyfriend how i feel. We reciently decided to go back to just dating, meaning we are still dating but we can see other people. It hurts quite bad somethimes. This poem is me trying to express in words how i feel, a mixture of heartbreak sadness and love...everything that i am left with after a broken heart...that is what is left. Its hard to explain and this poem is quite short for me but i think it makes farily good sense. Well tell me what you think i always like feedback. Thanks
Countrychick06
Ok themem is: Relationships and how i feel about them. Going through problems with how i feel so this is going to be my theme because how i feel about relationships and this certian boy in my life is all that i can think/wright about wright now so maybe this will help me know how i feel
A contest entry
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Comments
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Everything mixed up
Twisted together
In whats left of a broken heart
Those lines were so beautiful- and so easy to relate to. You penned your thoughts beautifully...and you are right in saying that it's hard to tell him how you feel. I have been through something like this and it hurt real bad. But I am sure things would be better someday.
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I can understand this poem....
You want so bad to express your thoughts and feelings to the one you love but it's hard to at times...Lord, don't I know!
Thank you for sharing; I hope writing this helped you to feel somewhat better. The best to you
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