To love another so completely that it numbs the mind
To trust another so passionately that it breaks constraints
To need another so desperately that breathing hurts without Him
Bondage releases one from society's rules
Discipline allows one to run amock with love and understanding
Domination accepts weaknesses and strengthens them
Submission shows how strong one can be
Sadism shows absolute love
Masochism shows absolute devotion
It is strange how this lifestyle is so misunderstood
Some deem it as disgusting and perverted
They do not comprehend the enormity of the passion and love
Two people can feel for each other
It is not merely what happens on the 'outside'
But what goes on in the mind and heart
To willingly give over control to another
Shows that you trust that person completely
To agree to give a person the pain they require
Shows that the love for that person is unconditional
Most people see 'freaks of nature'
But we see something that the 'vanilla race' will never know
We see completion of each other and so much tenderness in the pain
We will never judge others as we are judged
We are, after all, all of one species
It can never be explained, until the judgment stops
And the acceptance begins
To me -
BDSM is a sign of absolution for my downfalls
A caress from my Master that calms my worries
A gold threaded chain that holds my mind to sanity
A whispered word from my Master to ease the denial society has so wrongly placed on my shoulders
To me -
BDSM is my minds 'happy place' where Master allows me in to rest from tiredness
He wipes the clouds away from the view and allows me to see so clearly
Master gives me what i crave, what i want, what i need
In a list
A contest entry
- The Reality of BDSM by Daidulus.
700 points, ended June 30, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW!
To say you brought tears to my eyes I hope would tell you how beautiful this is. STUNNING!
Never in my life have I experienced a love so powerful as that which I have for my Master... and the idea of ever EVER going back to a vanilla love... leaves me feeling deflated and lost. Thank you for putting together the words I could not express.
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"He wipes the clouds away from the view and allows me to see so clearly"
My darling pet, that is precisely what I try to do. If I do sometimes succeed then I am glad.
Together forever,
Your Loving Master
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Oh Master, You have NO IDEA how often You do this for me
Forever in Your service,
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I absolutely love this one, and you know why... This pretty much says it all, now don't it. I think this is definately a winner here, good luck to you.
**Master Ktulu**
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lol! Thank you my friend for the wonderful words of praise and the claps ... and, yes, i DO know why
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I think I have just read a trophy winning entry to this contest.The poet writes well,uses language that both scene and non scene readers may relate too and threads the entire piece together with passion,passion is often misunderstood as being sexual,but to be truly passionate about something is beyond those perameters and herein you explore the chains that do not bind but set free.The title was absolutely perfect,love,honour and obey,at first it is indicative of marriage and BDSM is beyond societal expectations of marriage whereby a ceremony takes place and the couple have a certificate to prove they are married legally,there is no need for certification for sub/dom,master/mistress,pet/slave as these are marriages of the mind and body,consensual relationships which fulfill the needs of the self and the other.Excellent write,I was considering entering but quite frankly you have taken all the points to the table and displayed them with finery.Kudos.
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Oh my
I am so grateful for your absolutely stunning comment and the claps Miss2u - thank you SO much
I am looking forward to your entry as it seems that you too have a find grasp of what a BDSM relationship is all about and every time I come across somebody who understands it broadens my love of the human race just that little bit more
Thank you once again for your kind words - they gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling
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wow, this was wonderful my dear. yeah i think what the problem is is that anything people don't understand they have issues with ans this is something that most people don't understand. i though see all the love and devotion you would have for your master within these words and it almost made me teary eyed reading this.
this is a wonderful ine and very heartfelt "We see completion of each other and so much tenderness in the pain" really i can't pick a favorite part of this as it was so complete and really felt deep in all areas. i think your last statement just topped this off perfectly
best of luck in this contest. be well and be blessed
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and the claps Lady, and I am truly glad to see that even though O/our relationship is 'different' W/we are not ALWAYS judged
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i would never presume to do that sweetie. you are a person, a person with a beautiful heart and spirit and that is whoyou are to me. you come with no label in my eyes, just a truly loving, passionate soul
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Thank you kind Lady for your openness to accept something different
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you know sweetie, all i can do now that i am getting to know you a little bit is just sit back and smile whenever i read your messages or replies. i really admire you and you are so sweet
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Wonderful
I truly felt this poem, and it is a very good one. I especially like how you managed to single out the fact that the "vanilla race", as you called them, consider us freaks and sadists, when not all are. I also enjoyed that you compared our lifestyle to that of the 'vanilla', and noting the fact that through the discipline a Dom/me gives, they bring the relationship that much closer with trust and love. Personally, when my sub does something that makes me happy, I make sure she knows how proud I am of her. Good job, my friend. -
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Thank you for your wonderful comments Matt - it is very true that the vanilla race will never understand the depth of a relationship such as this and it makes me truly angry when we are judged - *frown* - I don't understand who actually gave them the power that (as far as I know) only One has and that is to pass judgement ... strange race this human stuff ...
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Haha, you have no clue, love. We are not in this existence to judge, to accuse, and to prosecute. We are here to learn deviance from the path we humans originally led as savages (Neanderthal, and what not). As always love, your poetry amazes someone who's seen a great many number, because you write from the heart and the soul.
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Hmmmm ... sometimes methinks the Neanderthals had the right idea - chew with mouth open, spit when want to, dig in nose and never bath *grunt*
*sigh* - oh, wouldn't it be a wonderfully simple way of life?!
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Hmmmm
you chew with your mouth open?
I am sure it was a great great great...... great grandmother of yours that first told her son off for chewing with his mouth open!
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roflmao!
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