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Confusion

        Clouds of darkness
        World of hate
        A shadow late to wake
        I open my eyes...
        I see nothing
        Swirls along the night sky
        Im clouded by my fears
        My hate, my emotions
        They grow and take over
        Where will I go from here?
        What will I do?

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Another old poem that is only on here for a friend.

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  • ArmorXForXSleep
    June 29, 2007

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    This poem is very deep it has a great flow and and has good descriptions I like it much and good luck


  • XfrozenXsolidX
    June 15, 2007
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    great

    wow. i love this poem.
    [Clouds of darkness
    World of hate]

    Great opening!