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Rain

When I sit in the rain I feel no pain.
      It washes my tears away...
      And yet I bleed so endlessly
      A lifless color pours from me.

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Who knows what I was feeling at this time.

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  • ArmorXForXSleep
    June 29, 2007

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    I very much like this poem because it's not like the ones I've read it's short but it says a lot! very cool and good luck