Beneath the huge round oval dome
Is where I sit and my spirit roams
The scent is beyond belief so fresh
I could get lost in its fragrant mesh
I'd sit a lifetime and retire inside
It could be my shelter and where I hide
It makes me smile from east to west
I love this place the most and the best
Inside it has plants high into the sky
But the dome blocks its perfume from escaping by
Underneath the huge dome all its smells are trapped
And inside my head and heart are its goodness wrapped
I could soak up its essence sun up to sun dowm
I wouldn't care if I was the only one around
Just to lay my head upon a leaf that's misty wet
Only God would know the feelings that I get from that
And the oxygen in the airy mist is pure bliss
Hundreds of plants, giving off, its elegance
Cancel everything for the rest of my life's span
If I could take this beautiful domed garden by the hand
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A contest entry
- Your happy place. by samantha jean.
800 points, ended July 21, 2007, 27 entries
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I think this is a really good poem and i could actally put that picture in my mind
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Great!
I could almost imagine I was in a forest in the cool hours of the morning. I was in sort of a gloomy mood before I read your poem. It really picked me up. It took me back to when I was small and ran in the woods bear footed. Life was sooo much simpler then
Thanks
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Thanks, it actually is great to just sit in such a place and breathe in. lol
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Beautiful imagery!
Now, that is one blissful dream! I can plainly see how that would be anyone's "happy place."
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Thank you so much. I appreciate this lovely review. lol
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you rock this one with smooth serenity...again---much growth you have shown...a truly great piece
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Iggy TY
This place rocks. You can breathe in there, real air. lol
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i do not have a happy place where i go, i just have a place lol it's pot luck to how i feel once there a good poem.
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I have just gotten this review, see sometimes when we backtrack, we get the true meaning. Got it now. lol
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Well lol
This is the only place I have of this nature. hahaha out of a whole big earth of places I only have one...so don't feel bad, I barely produced this one. lol TY
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