You're running and running
Trying to make up for lost time
But you can't,
Because it's too late.
You try your hardest
To avenge your past
But you can't,
Because it's too late.
You're hurting inside
Trying to get someone to forgive you
But they won't,
Because it's too late.
Time is slipping,
The world is falling apart
Nothing can save you
Because it's too late
The Earth is destroyed
Nothing is saved
Except for one building
Is it too late?
As you walk inside
The house takes off spinning
Everything is back to normal now
For once, you're not too late
Author notes
I wrote this for english last year, and it's one of my fav's that I've done.
A contest entry
- Prewrites But NO "fresh" writes by ecrivain01.
450 points, ended June 6, 2008, 77 entries
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An Awesome Moment in Time...
Thank you for sharing!!!
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It's not bad, but ...
awesome is a bit over the top.
Thanks for entering.
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woah man this is awsome i love i
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Good.
We all feel like that from time to time, but if we really try,it's never too late. Constant flow mad the poem very tight, good work. -
hahaha, delightful story, to not be too late. its good to have things at normal, and iots not late.
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Like it!
I feel like this every day!
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