Well now look at you
Oh so wretched
Oh so eloquent.
Your Phosphorescent life
Has blinded you.
And when it's time to dance,
You're too busy bleeding,
Too busy trying so hard
Not to read between the lines.
So ditch the new design,
Let's try speaking for ourselves.
It's time to shed your skin.
It's time to forget for the sake of memories.
And its not just nostalgia,
It's the hard truth
Your phosphorescent life has blinded you.
And when it's time to Dance,
Your too busy bleeding,
Too busy trying to accept the lies.
Well look at you now,
Oh so tragic,
Oh so proud.
Now why don't you try
thinking for yourself tonight
I promise it's the best
high you've ever had.
Author notes
It's hard to watch someone you love decide that they don't want to try to get better with you, and they won't let you help them after you've made progress...
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It seems complete to me
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