The anger in the air was palpable
Dissension breaking walls of right and wrong
Distraught by all the fervor I’m aghast
Riotous they break the wondrous song
A susurration comes out in the dark
Vicissitudes are coming with the wind
Comeuppance for the violence is nigh
For all the past ebullience of sin
And then a new and better world be born
One lacking all the pain and sin of past
A peace amongst the people everywhere
A joyous peace that will forever last
Abodes will open up to everyone
The juncture now has been left far behind
And we will burgeon in this time of joy
Incursions will no longer be to find
Officious, we will make our stand today
Organic, we are bound forever one
Now we hold on to brothers, sisters dear
And wait there for the rising of the sun
Author notes
I USED ALL THE WORDS!!! I was so inspired by them that I just had to use them. In some cases, I used the uncommon meaning for a word(i.e. ebullience(which usually has positive connotations))
A contest entry
- ~ Word Bank Anyone?~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended June 29, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for joining in our contest we hope that you will join us in the next round, there are two more wordbanks before the winners of all three compete against each other, hope to see you keep trying,
Warm thoughts
Tearz -
Excellent
How wonderfully you have used these words. This was just a delight to read. Very best of luck in this contest. Oh I did enjoy this.
~Pamela 
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Loved the subject of this write. My son leaves for a second tour in Iraq and I am so fearful for him. I wish for a better world. Great job and nice flow to this poem. Well done.
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And you used them well! Another very impressive piece! I thought my word bank was a challenge but you have made it look like childs play! Well done! THanks for entering and best wishes in the contest!
Frogz~ -
I must say that was no easy word bank to use and you have done a wonderful job of placing them within your poem and keeping the poem flow
and brought us a wonderful world through your words.
Thanks for sharing
warm thoughts
Frozentearz
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