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A Letter To a Friend

Visions of the past
Smile on me tonight
My friend I feel your presence
Your strength and will to fight

I see that strong young face
The uniform so fine
And this tall Marine...
Alive and in his prime

It's many years my friend,
I've not forgotten you
The times we spent together
The talk of girls and many brews

I remember when you left
You said your last goodbye
And letters from the jungle
Shed their fear, without a lie

My uniform was different
My fate was to remain
And you went off to heaven
So great was then God's gain

Tonight ,I sit here thinking

A tear drop fills my eye

You died before that twenty

But your star now lights the sky

 

By Bob Fox

 

Dedicated to Ed Furlong, My friend






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  • adios muchachos gold member
    November 15
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    Bob

    Finally got here after searching through about 16 pages.Phew!
    I like this one, Bob.

    My Mom was mother to four veterans and often said, "None of us can understand what it was they went through." I don't try, it would be futile.

    A kid from my neighborhood didn't get home, Tito. I think he wore elevated shoes to pass the height deal. But he had the cojones!

    And Ritchie Lazerick lost most of his left leg to a VC grenade. He said his Sargent,
    named Morales, a Mexican guy, carried him about three miles to be airlifted out.
    Every time I hear an imbecile say, "Why don't these wet-backs go back to their own country" or something to that effect, I want to whip the dog-shit out of them.

    Good homage to a friend. Shakes and shudders.

    John


  • Ani Grace
    November 10
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    I am humbled by you.


  • condor gold member
    October 22

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    The heart of a true friend penned such a beautiful dedication to a friend who has forever held his memory pure and with so much respect and emotion. I really loved this for it spoke so openly about your friend. It was a beautiful verse that read....

    My uniform was different
    My fate was to remain
    And you went off to heaven
    So great was then God's gain

    That was the most feeling couple of lines that really touched my soul and made me not only smile but sigh. God did indeed gain much, even though the pain that was left behind was terrible. Excellent rhyme, rhythm and flow. God bless Ed Furlong and all past, present and future who give so much of themselves for others. Thank you so much for entering and the very best in the contest.

  • Judith Chandler
    October 3

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    There's a feeling of cameraderie here. That's the part of your piece that I really like.

  • firefly star
    October 3

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    this was such a fantastic dedication, to whom i'm sure was a fantastic friend! sometimes i think friendship can be more powerful than true love itself. thank you for sharing.


  • BeautifulFlame
    September 28

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    My dear friend

    Thank you for sharing the most intimate part of your soul.
    Friendship...
    This is to honor not only your friend but you let us know a name, a person, we would have never known had you not wrote for him.

    Thank you Bob
    Thank you ( Ed Furlong for we all honor your memory)

    love,
    ~Lisa~


  • sinfull
    September 11

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    hits me bradside

    so heart-warming and touched. Friends that keep memories alive... This poem is so eloquent, so deeply felt...most know someone there now or recently there and recognize the dread..this is a beautifully written piece... thank you for sharing


  • the russian
    September 11

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    It's absolutely beautiful! I can absolutely relate, and I'm sorry for your loss.


  • My Chronos gold member
    September 10

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    I simply incredible read. It really touches the heart.


  • Camille R Castillo
    August 18

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    Had to read again

    While just viewing the different contests on this site, I came across your poem again, and I can honestly say that it touched me the same way it did the first time I read it. A very beautiful, heartfelt poem that I am quite sure has touched many, many others as well. You did and excellent job with this wonderfully written expression, and I just wanted to share this with you, again. Great Job.


    ~Camille

  • Camille R Castillo
    August 11
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    How beautiful. What an eloquent, heartfelt letter to a friend. Honestly, I find this very touching and it brought a tear to my eye! A very beautiful expression.


  • Midniterose
    August 10

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    This is beautiful and sad, yet comforting. Memories are gold and our friends are Platinum. You honor him greatly with your memory and composition. And to see a star and remember him is even more honorable. Oftentimes when people pass away we are so self absorbed that we forget that person, who they are, how they affected our lives, and how we loved them. Its great to hear a memory, especially when written so artistically. Thank you


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 4

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    oh what a lovely dedication to your friend, those memories I would think are treasured by you, one can never forget that star that lights the sky...
    thank you for this entry
    good luck
    Linda

  • WranglerSteve gold member
    August 4

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    A+++

    Wow, thats great! It's very rare these days that a poem will actualy get my attention and hold it all the way through. I commend you good sir.


  • Dezzy26
    August 1

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    I had to read this one again... I loved it so much the first time I read it. It brings me comfort... thanks again for sharing your work.


  • ValentineSvetlana
    July 31

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    Ed Furlong.. heard that name recently, though I cannot quite remember where.
    Generally I dislike rhyming poetry because I feel like it confines the writer, but you can rhyme outside of the damned box so I've made an exception. : ) You use better words. It makes a difference. ; )


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 20
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    the Letter

    speaks of friendship, pals if you will
    said but well penned in memory to him
    thanks for sharing

  • msjuicytech
    July 20
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    This is wonderful... I know you miss your friend ;-)


  • Antebellum
    July 19

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    Visions of the past
    Smile on me tonight
    My friend I feel your presence
    Your strength and will to fight

    I love the way you started this.
    wonderful write.
    thanks for entering.


  • chilequeen gold member
    July 19

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    I truly love this poem and what it says about your friend and the love you had for him. Just so inspiring Bob.
    Joanni

  • Dezzy26
    July 13
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    This is a very touching write. Good penning, reading this touched my heart. I can't emagine the pain from the loss of a loved one. My boyfriend is away in the military in Afgan... I pray for his safety daily. May your life be filled with abundant blessings to you and those you touch!

    Desire'e

  • rainbow rose
    July 8
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    luved this poem keep writin.


  • SEA angel gold member
    July 6

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    A beautiful tribute

    My husband was a Green Beret Medic in the Vietnam Conflict with one silver and two bronze stars. Even now, as per survivor's guilt, he never allows himself to have too much fun since those he couldn't save were lost while under the gun.


  • Cherrylv
    July 3

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    I can't add any more to what everyone has already said except that I think he is still with you and always will be.

    Cherry xx


  • rite
    July 2

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    The power of this poem is in the restraint words that are understatements reflecting the opposite of what they seem to express. War is mankind's ultimate crime; so many talents and good souls are erased from life by it - the ritual human sacrifice of the elite. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care.


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    June 26

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    Beautifully Expressed!

    I am sorry for the pain that gives you the inspiration to write this. Just reading this makes me mourn all of those who have passed on before. This is a really wonderful write.


  • ladybug.
    June 24

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    This poem screams with subtle emotion. It's very well played out, very low-key. I love it. Thanks for sharing.


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    May 27
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    Simply Beautiful my friend
    Great read


  • BrokenSanity
    May 26

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    Oh, wow... this melted my heart... beautiful.. everything was perfect in thes... the flow, rhythm and the rhyming... everything, well done.


  • karma-n-peace
    May 2

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    This causes many emotions as I read it.
    Anger, Sadness, Empathy...

    My dear friend Doug (I called him Dougy but I know he only tolerated it lol) was a casualty of that "policing" over in Veitnam.
    He made it home with a broken back which healed but the emotional and mental wounds never did.
    Finally he died due to an over dose/aneurysm/car accident that was a direct result of that damned war.

    This poem is a beautiful honor to your friend and I know of many who would find it just as touching.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    April 28

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    excellent~

    This is a beautiful poem for a friend that you must of cared deeply about...............
    So many young people around our area and in Ky have lost their lives to the war....
    I wish the war would end and we would never hear the word again....................
    A heartfelt,beautiful and wonderful poem
    I know he would of loved this poem
    Probably more than the medal............
    Hugs
    Susan~~~~


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 13

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    Good luck in the contest you have a vry good write here. Letters from the jungle wow. It was a pleasure to read.

  • Dobar Dan
    April 12

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    Kind Of Sad Bob

    To lose a friend in such a way - probably in some war that never should have been - so many of you fine young men and women (pawns) gave their lives in vain - sooooooo sad Bob - and the way we sugarcoat the whole mess - makes me cry too - your are great writer Bob - I like your style - my uncle died in Zagreb at the hands of the Croat Nazis - there is street there named after him - after Croatia broke away from Jugoslavia - many wanted the street re-named because he was a Communist - but the city fathers said no - it's a part of history - leave it - Bless God Bob - Joe

    • Bob Fox
      April 12
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      Ty Joe

      Your words are appreciated. But we must come to realize that one murderous tyrant is no better then another. Wars have been & always will be fought. The hope is that the just wins them. Tyrants like Hitler, Stalin, Mao, Pol Pot & Mussolini are certainly above the norm in todays spector. Lets hope we see no more of those.


  • historygeek6190
    April 5
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    wow gr8 job


  • Nicada silver member
    April 5

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    Wow! An amazing and loving tribute to your dear friend. He would be so proud to read this, but I am sure he can see it from heaven too. You did a wonderful job expressing your emotions. Very touching write! Blessing, Patty


  • A.Joker
    April 5

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    Inspiring!

    I really love the way you've characterized the Marine: Young and innocent, but courageous and ready to defend. This was such a sad poem, but what really breaks my heart, is that it's all true. There can be no better poem, than a poem written out of reality. This is without a doubt one of the best poems I've read since I joined AP. A real "tear-jerker". KEEP WRITING!!!


  • Meroza
    March 31

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    This poem really is personal and touching, filled with emotions and love. Sadly, this poem is abowe 50 words and I can not judge it. This poems shouldn't be changed either, so I'll just leave it here, so that everyone can read your beautiful words.


  • Jaded Lily gold member
    March 26

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    Such a beautiful tribute to your friend. Sad yet heartfelt and once again gave me goose bumps as I read it. It touched me deeply. I have a son who was in the National Guard and was stationed in Afghanistan...need I say more? I think not. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent here with us. Bravo!!
    Lily ♥


  • Emmyb gold member
    February 11

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    touching and heart warming

    hey new yorker.
    I always wanted to live in new york and become a writer. instead im in london and allpoetry is the furthest ive made it!
    Im glad ive come across your poetry - and this one is very moving. im looking forward to reading the rest. I love your description of this person -
    I see that strong young face
    The uniform so fine
    And this tall Marine...
    Alive and in his prime
    Youve really given us a vision of what was like.

    Tonight ,I sit here thinking

    A tear drop fills my eye

    You died before that twenty

    But your star now lights the sky


    a hopeful and peaceful ending to something which was positively heart wrenching at the time i imagine.

    well done. must go and read some more of yours now.

    emma


  • daffodilblossom
    January 29
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    wow

    im suprised i havent read this yet so touching

  • Treasure 5 gold member
    January 27
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    awsome

    You do some wonderful work your self. Wonderful flow of words. I love the way you have rythem. I have a sure winner on my hands. Called getting caught in the rain.


  • Cbc
    January 25
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    this is perfection. i love this. you are a great man. <3 your friend was lucky to have you :3


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    January 25

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    Again your way with words is perfect, and the rhyming incorporated without flaw. A brilliant dedication.
    Laura


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    January 24

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    I understand a little better now Bob, thanks for directing me to this moving piece
    Juls

  • evelynxxoo
    January 21
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    so sad and touching to see so much blood shed and pain in ones life it must be very difficult to settle at times war is so heavy and the flashbacks must be terrrible so sorry bob and your friend will love this in his place among the stars


  • StarEyes
    January 10

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    Bob,

    This hits close to home! In more ways then I think you know... This is truly beautiful, and reminds me of one that I lost, not in the service of our country, but to cancer.

    I feel every ounce of your love, and pain in this one.

    You know where to find me if ever you want or need to talk.

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Peachy
    December 1, 2008

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    This was truly beautiful and it was further glorified by a magnificent rhyme and rhythm.
    Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    A great write to your dear departed friend. They are always missed! But he wil alwalys be in your memories

  • wellbegone
    November 21, 2008

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    Compassion lives here

    what a deep, truly compassionate man you are. To have written so eloquently, from your heart of hearts, What a wonderful friend you must have been. Many blessings to you!


  • Whispers of Hope
    November 21, 2008

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    Wow this is so beautiful brought tears to my eyes the imagery and flow just amazingly perfect and I love the last line so much meaning is held in this one piece!!


  • nichtmich silver member
    November 21, 2008

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    So sad and beautiful. He will always be young, handsome and strong in your eyes. One can't help but wonder what life would have held in store and regret dreams that didn't come to fruition. Poignant read.


  • georgie
    November 19, 2008

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    Such a sad and yet beautiful friend... im sure your friend would be more honoured by this dedication than any medal
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


  • MermaidSinging68
    November 14, 2008

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    beautiful!

    Love this...it's sad, but there's a certain joy in the memories of better times. A lovely tribute to one who fought for freedom, even if it was unpopular at the time...may he never be forgotten.

    Well done, fellow Brooklynite!


  • Gulfbreeze
    November 11, 2008

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    Touching

    What a great commemerative to a fallen friend. This is beautiful and I hope that you would give a copy of this to his family, they would cherish it. Beautiful write Poet


  • LadySerenity
    November 10, 2008
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    Amazing

    This brought tears to my eyes. This is written beautifully. Thank you for sharing it

  • DepthsofShadows
    November 9, 2008

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    Simply Amazing

    Your words have captured something that is simply amazing. It really captures the idea that even with time, one can live on in the way they touch a life. I'm sure your friend would be absolutely touched to be remembered and immortalized in such a way. Bravo!


  • Mariana gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    WOW!

    You have put such feeling into this poem. Even though time marches on...we never never forget. My brothers and their friends were in the army. Some friends didn't make it. It was a awful trying...tragic time. I know how you feel.
    This is a well deserved win Bob.
    These are favourite lines:-
    'Tonight ,I sit here thinking
    A tear drop fills my eye
    You died before that twenty
    But your star now lights the sky'
    Shine on
    Mariana


  • Stardust-luvr
    November 8, 2008
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    CONGRATS ON THE WELL DESERVING SILVER!!!!!!

  • Nicada silver member
    November 8, 2008
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    As I commented before on this, it is so sad but so beautifully written. Thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty


  • Aimee Hill
    November 8, 2008

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    Tears!

    Again... your way with words has captured and captivated me. Thank you for directing me towards this poem... I am again, nowhere close to being disappointed.

    I am sorry you had to see him go...especially during a war that will forever take on a bad name. It seems he wasn't 20 yet? Unless I read into that wrong... that means he was so young, barely seeing the world. Sad *frown*

    I felt peace reading this, again, thank you for showing me to this page.

  • Stardust-luvr
    November 8, 2008

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    My dear friend this still brought tears to my heart and eyes just as it did last May when you and I had met on AP and you had shown these words to me. many hugss always my friend and many blessings. xxxx my heart and prayers shall be with you and your friend's family. xxx

  • Nicada silver member
    November 8, 2008
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    This is beautifully sad and a touching tribute to a friend that you undoubtedly had an amazingly, strong bond with. This would fit nicely into my contest which ends real soon. Great write straight from the heart! The best kind! Blessings, Patty

  • michaeline
    November 5, 2008

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    This is a great ribute to your friend.He would be proud and you should be too.You chose your words well and did not leave a dry tear here.So touching are your words.I would not change one thing on this poem.Your friend was truely a great man and I know that you must miss him alot.I am glad I got to read such a heartfelt and poignant poem.


  • silver-X-lining gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    This is beautiful and touching. It's something I think a lot of people can sympathize with, and well written. It evokes a lot of emotion in the reader as well. Well penned, this is a wonderful write.

    ~HH


  • Suzianne
    October 24, 2008

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    A beautiful tribute

    Bob, I think your friend would feel comforted that you remember him and find hope and peasant memories of your past together. This is really fine. Thank you for sharing it.


  • Lillianna
    October 24, 2008

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    Never Forgotten'

    'Never Forgotten'
    That was the message I took from this piece...and such a beautiful dedication to a brave soul.

    I shan't forget this piece in a hurry.

    Kind regards always,

    Lilly


  • Nature Song silver member
    October 23, 2008

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    A soldiers last plea! A letter, a simple goodbye! How heartfelt this poem was written as a final farewell. Brought a tear to my eye, as I have lost friends in battles recently myself. ~Sie


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 23, 2008
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    Beautiful Melancholy...

    Bob, this is a perfect tribute to you friend, Ed. War is cruel. And to all the soldiers everywhere, and all those MIA and KIA, I say, God Bless You All, and RIP... May the Peace and Freedom Bell ring soon!! Write on, shine on, Poet!! Thank you for sharing your heart-felt poem with us. Peace Always, Cyn


  • MercyMe
    October 21, 2008
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    Left me speechless


  • Truetome
    October 21, 2008

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    memories of long 'go days brought upon the author thoughts in remembrance and love to write a poem that many of us can relate, thank you for writing such a sincere poem ~


  • Jesann gold member
    October 19, 2008

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    Very Moving!!!
    A beautiful memory, and wonderful dedication to your friend.
    I love the lines "Visions of the past Smile on me tonight"
    so, even though.. "A teardrop fills my eye"...
    it would appear that the memories of times together are good ones..treasures held within your heart!!!


  • rbruce gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    One of your best Bob, written with feeling and style.
    A genuine tribute to your friend.


  • OnyxtheForsaken
    October 16, 2008

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    What a wonderful dedication to a comrade. A real tribute to a marine who is still a friend forever. Excellent work.


  • Super-man
    October 16, 2008

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    You've Done It once more BOB

    Wow Bob.  You really have a way with the mind. You bend time and imagination.

    Stunning.


  • LadyJane13
    October 16, 2008

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    message

    Great people are few,loss and acceptance,desire and will with strength to still live,move forward.I hear you Bob.Well penned,as always

    Jane


  • Leonura
    October 16, 2008

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    oh chara! this was truly álainn (beautiful) Tá brón orm (I'm sorry) for your loss but it's something that tuigim (I understand). Thank you chara for sharing this with me, you were right.. It would make me cry.


  • LalalalaLoopstah gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    This is so sad, makes me want to cry. Your friend is very honorable and though he can't be here to spend time with you, it somehow makes me feel better to know that such brave souls are with us all on a much greater scale.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    moving!

    wow that is so deep, you poured each word

    out of your heart like they were drops of blood.

    mourning the loss of your couragous young  friend,

    it was an honor to read this Bob thank you for sharing

    your experience

     

     

    Rend The Veil  


  • Janenroses
    August 31, 2008

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    Touching...

    Yes Bob I see... you believe it's an honor to die in wars... Maybe... I just hate wars that's all.. I know some wars are sometimes necessary, but why do they have to be... I enjoyed the poem, my eyes watered when i red it... Great poem, Ed would have been proud..

    • Bob Fox
      August 31, 2008
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      Jane

      Actually I believe that those that are brave enough should be honored. And never forgotten . Ty so much.


  • peregrin
    August 31, 2008

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    Tonight ,I sit here thinking
    A tear drop fills my eye
    You died before that twenty
    But your star now lights the sky

    Damn...
    powerful write.

    Thank you for entering my contest.

  • Judith Chandler
    August 27, 2008
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    I enjoyed reading this poem. Although I'm against war, it does promote a comradeship among those who fight and this piece certainly brings that out.


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    August 24, 2008
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    A nice poem perhaps but, alas, completely inappropriate for my competition!!!


  • Angelflower
    August 15, 2008

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    Oh!! this really brought a tear to my eye!!! My father was in the Marine Corps and my Grandfather in the Army.. I was going to go to the Marines like my father but he started crying and I couldn't go.. Lol. But this.. this was just so beautiful.. Very heartfelt..Thank you very much for sharing this..

    Angel


  • PerfectTonight
    August 15, 2008

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    Very well written. Full of emotion, yet tethered by reality and pain. Overall, a great read.

    Thanks!


  • Gwenevere
    August 15, 2008

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    A lovely poem of remembrance.We are never to know the reason why some are taken so early but I am sure that your friend founs his peace.It is good to honour him so.I hope you are keeping well, Ros

    • Bob Fox
      August 15, 2008
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      Ros

      Ty my friend. You know even to this day I remember his moms face when I went to see her after she called me about Ed being killed. I will take that sadness to the grave I think.But he loved his country as did most of the guys back then.

  • MajorTom91
    August 14, 2008

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    Excellent poem. I never had any friends that went to Vietnam (I'm only 16), but I have numerous family members that were there, many never came back (I never got to meet them, of course).


  • albymyheart gold member
    June 11, 2008

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    An emotional an very personal write. The reader is drawn into this as if it was him/herself writing of the pain at losing such a dearly loved friend. How lucky we are to be able to pen such beauty in words and create such a heartfelt dedication, when that is all that is left for us to be able to give.

    Thank you for bringing this poem to my attention, it shows that soft place in your heart where the wall neglects to protect. A great write...alby


  • Xianaria gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    wow...

    I spent 5 years in the Army, but never knew anyone personally that was KIA. This is a deeply personal, emotional write and I am deeply moved. Well done.


  • Darker Side To Light
    May 26, 2008
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    This is very moving, I love it.

  • Stardust-luvr
    May 24, 2008
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    my dear friend this brought tears to my heart and eyes as i could feel the close bond you both held as well as the heartfelt compassion that exudes from your spirit when you spoke of your friend whom you had lost at such a young age and makes it all the more reason to read during memorial weekend. thank you!! You both are an honor for having served for all humanity. I have a high school classmate whom passed a several yrs ago from Cancer leaving behind a wife and 2 small children - he was a patrolman of the Iowa Highway patrol. many blessings always thank you again for sharing you with me. xxx

    • Bob Fox
      May 24, 2008
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      My friend

      As we grow we know we shall see family & friends pass on. In my years I have seen many. Especially when I was young. But even now, for last year I lost 3 friends, it never is easy. we can only honor them. You are very kind . I ty again

      • Stardust-luvr
        May 24, 2008
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        hun loss is never easy whether its someone very close or even a semi close aquaintance - in 1978 i lost my Dad right b4 my 15th bday. in 2003 in 2 weeks time I lost my sons biological father, my mother and my mother in law.then 6 weeks later an uncle. its never easy but in time the pain lessens and the memories continue to grow.


  • c staff sgt smirfet
    May 19, 2008
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    very nicely done im sorry to hear about your lose i really enjoyed your poem


  • Lovewaits
    May 19, 2008

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    Beautiful!!!

    That was very touching and it moved me to tears. I felt your pain as I read on. You have a beautiful talent.....


  • kvwriter silver member
    May 19, 2008

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    Wonderful tribute to Ed, your dear friend. War is an awful thing and it has claimed so many of the world's soldiers. And your loving poem states of cherished memories and those are priceless, Bob.

    We are blessed to have memories of our loved ones. Ed is blessed in your remembrance of them.

    Just beautiful!
    Kelly


  • pattyann4500
    May 18, 2008

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    Bob, I am truly sorry for the loss of your friend. That war, and many others, claimed so many wonderful lives, and the Heavens are the better for it while we cry for them. Know that he is where he belongs, drink a toast to his loving memory and know he would be proud of these beautiful words. Patricia

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