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I'm a Walrus Mr Pacman

I am a walrus,
Life as lazy as can be.
No worries, no problems,
Just a sun bathe on the beach.

I watch as all the other walrus,
Play along the edge.
I have a strange urge to just yell out,
"Mr Pacman will eat you!"

For that is almost all we fear,
For us big walrus seem to be,
In a similar shape and form,
Of that of ghosts moving around a maze.

Mr Pacman please don't eat me,
For I am nothing but a walrus.
I have no need for chasing games,
No need to run from yellow blobs.

I say we be friends Pacman,
And have a drink or two or three.
And don't you worry bout the cost,
Cause Mr Pacman, next round is on me.

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Skye's op. 3, hehe I had fun

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  • Phiona
    June 18, 2007
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    Muchly huge claps and kudos to the Lucky Leprechaun! It's a beautiful write and incredibly hilarious, it's great to see you back to writting the awesomess random stuff that you normally do. I love the pretteh poem - and the pretteh title! I wanna be a PacMan!


  • Larue
    June 15, 2007
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    Haha! I officially love you for taking the challenge and using it so well. I really like this. It's nicely written, for the most part. Although, the flow was off - mainly because the first and last stanzas have rhyming lines, and the rest don't. It was pretty good. Good luck!
    -Skye


    • The-Singer
      June 16, 2007
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      I didn't even notice that.
      I just wrote what came naturally.


  • Tiggs
    June 15, 2007
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    i friggin love it seanipoop! hahah. awsumness. epitome of random arsed! yay u.