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Feeling Silly!!!

My muse feels abused
when I refuse to peruse
the use of her views

I rather just dream
without any scheme
and deem any glean
as supreme

She shouts and she yells
while ringin' her bells
and dwells on the swells
who are using her spells

I pay her no mind
and politely decline
though at the time
I am in a bind
for a thought I can't find

So she's feeling neglected
My poems are rejected
We both get reflective
Feeling loss, unprotected

We decide on a style
Using both Muse and Me
and after awhile
Together we'll be
smile after mile after smile


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2) Humor- Something that will make me laugh.... Something stupid you've done...

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  • JanessaKatzer
    May 12, 2008
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    i like it!! i love the internal rhyme!!
    thanks for entering!! good luck!!


  • Erozay
    May 7, 2008
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    its cute


  • siddy jones
    April 15, 2008
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    good poem. it got me to laugh. good luck in the contest


  • XxshadowedcherryxX
    March 14, 2008
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    LOL!!... very good..... Had me laughing.. Best of Luck

    ~Nat ♥l


  • LadyDementia gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    Wow great piece. Has a nice bouncy feel to it as I read. You've done a great job with the flow and rhyme. Over all a superbly penned poem. Fits a wonderful dreamer to a tee. Thank you for entering our contest and good luck


  • daviscth silver member
    February 27, 2008
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    Thanks so much for posting in my contest.
    Cathy


  • daviscth silver member
    February 19, 2008

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    This is a great feel good piece. The image alone is good for a ton of smiles and I loved the feel good background. Thanks so much for posting.

  • RikaG2009
    February 14, 2008
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    Great poem. I really liked the rhyming and the energy from this poem.


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    February 14, 2008

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    Awesome write my friend! This was very amusing. Kept my attention the entire time. Thank you for sharing this with us. Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~~


  • La Tua Cantante
    December 31, 2007

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    This has a wonderful rhyme and flow to it. You really seem like you have a knack for rhyming. My favorite part is:
    "I pay her no mind
    and politely decline
    though I am in a bind
    for a thought I can't find"
    Thank you and good luck in my contest.
    -Dana.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    November 26, 2007

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    That is so darn true!!

    I could really relate to your poem! I too..have always
    had to "reign" in the muse that giggles in me too!
    For some reason, I don't feel totally bonded to a person
    until I hear them laugh and get a chance to hear their
    muse too! Probably why I married a charming man,
    who has a very silly muse inside him too!
    Keeps me sane and always laughing!

    I think you wrote a very good point, and did it so well,
    embrace and befriend the muse in you!! loved it!!
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen : ))


  • Eternal-Jammy-Jam
    August 24, 2007
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    here I am agin haha well nice poem again lol

  • Eternal-Jammy-Jam
    August 22, 2007
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    I like it great I like how its kinda happy you know anyway good luck

  • Bad Bill
    August 12, 2007
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    A clever, yet light-hearted, poem and a pleasure to read--good luck in the contest.

    Bill


  • masky
    August 8, 2007

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    Absolutely great poem for making me feel great in the morning!!!
    Indeed, silly and easy to read, but actually very powerful, in a way. Very able of changing my mood!
    Interesting rhyming scheme, too. It's been a while since I haven't seen this style.
    "So she's feeling neglected
    My poems get rejected"
    Could this be the revenge of the muse? LOL
    And my absolute favorite part:
    "We decide on a style
    using muse... using me
    Together we'll be
    Smile after mile after smile"
    It adds such a happy glow to the poem! Also, I'd like to congratulate you on using a good color scheme for the background. Well done!!!
    As a suggestion...I don't actually know.
    Maybe in the last stanza:
    "We decide on a style
    Using both muse and me
    Together we'll be;
    Smile after mile after smile"
    Otherwise, nice write Thank you for entering, and good luck!!!
    P.S. I hope this lengthy comment didn't bore you...


  • tara wilson gold member
    June 26, 2007

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    "So she's feeling neglected
    My poems get rejected"
    lol...this is great I think my muse feels neglected lately


  • Rainy Days
    June 15, 2007
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    Haha, nice poem. I like the picture, too.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    June 15, 2007
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    what a great light poem..I loved it....well done, pen friend.

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