Jamaica's tropical jerky,
it's flavor can't be beat.
The secret's in the jerk,
and the way we rub our meat.
Author notes
Bef jerky used to be my favorite snack. This me have changed that forever.
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A contest entry
- Jingle your favorite food for me... by AnotherName.
525 points, ended June 25, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Slogans by 2lullabyhaven.
450 points, ended September 27, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
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I'll have to try some, soon - thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest lol
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A very neat slogan, akin to a jolly jingle,cleverly crafted as it works on more than one level.Bravo!
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eww, I love it!
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Loved this! I am impressed with poetry that has layers. Lots can be read into this. That makes it cleverly written and quite original. Your lines are not hard to remember, and are very catchy. Excellent! I smiled widely after reading this. Good luck! Thanks for the entry.
April
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Wonderful
hehehe...I needed that. Thanks.
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Catchy
LOL...made me laugh if not smile. It was short, but had a nice little beat and tempo to it. I know it was about jerky, but all it made me think about was jerk chicken...lol. Lively and lovely piece. -
Good write. I'm not a fan for beef jerky, but I thought the flow of this poem was good and it seemed it could have a good tune. Keep writing.
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LMAO! Would make one think. Not sure I'll ever look at jerky the same again. Good luck in the contest hun.
Storm
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