sailing in my boat
completely alone
watching the night sky
a light in the distance
a sliver of hope
the guy of my dreams
floating towards me
could it be?
no, it could not possibly be
his boat is inches away now
it starts to sink
I grab the railing
not wanting to let go
he disappers into the dark, unforgiving sea
I look for him
yelling to him
and all the time i spent
searching for the nothing
I missed the one who loved me
descending from the sky
he was there to help me
and I ignored him for that nothing
I just wanted to know why?
why must i live
in this life of never?
A contest entry
- Just Me...And You... by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended September 8, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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wow. that was wonderfu
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This is a sadly good poem; but in all honesty I don't quite see the point to where it fits the contest...
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Goodness Me...
This was interesting. At first it sounded like my poem "Floating" then it changed and started to look like the movie "Titanic". You put your own little twists and turns in it and it turned out wonderful!
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