In dark's stillness we disturb
the dust that settled
Lamplights flicker feverishly,
sputtering into oblivion
out-out-out
Blind faith in anything
can get you killed
Heavy raindrops fall
through the stillness
Still we must be still
and wait out the storm
of darkened consciousness
The spasm and the cry
The Lost City is silent
Generation's lost in gears
grinding like shuddering seconds,
the shiver of the seasons
Come and go, inhale, exhale
into the silence
Life is too precious
Apathy plays games
in the streets
of oblivion
And love ceases
like the moment
the moment of belief
the moment of prayer
Peccavi
Prophets preach
on street curbs,
telling of saviors only
the blind can see
and only the lost
can accept
Here we walk on raindrops
and fall through gaps
in the wicked silence
Thunder echoes through
the coming tempest,
surging so far away
To act and react
to run and rerun
Slow motion storms
pass in black and white
like misery and nightmares
of living in lies
and drowning in
oblivion
Out on your own
where shadows play
games with the soul
and the dead dwell and dance
to hypnotic rituals
in silence
A contest entry
- Quickie for the Bored Poet by zillion.
300 points, ended June 15, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
I loved the lines such as:
"To act and react
to run and rerun"
Where it used opposites, or repeated itself. For some reason, I thought it gave the poem a personality that I don't see often. This was very interesting. -
Wow
You are such a master of painting such incredible images with your poems. This was fantastic. Good luck in the contest.



