Words so used up,
I've got nothing left to say.
The silence no longer stings,
with awkward thoughts.
Mind in only memories,
you can't relive the past
(but I wish I could).
Even the worst decisions,
feel like home
to me anymore.
Hollow eyes,
I see you.
I am just
the starless
pavement.
Author notes
Weirdness is all I've got right now.
A contest entry
- Quickie for the Bored Poet by zillion.
300 points, ended June 15, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ahhhhh I have been left with nothing to say at times. Those times I'm lost for words because I knew anything I said would not solve my problems. Then I just pray things work out...and usually they do. Thank you I enjoy the poem and I don't think it's weird I think it's a good write. I wish you much success in your writes
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Thank you very much
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"Even the worst decisions,
feel like home
to me anymore."
This stanza felt like it needed a 'doesn't' before 'feel'. Or maybe feel needs to have an 's'.
The last stanza was intriguing.
Zill -
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Well, decision is plural, so doesn't wouldn't work, and feels doesn't fit with the pluralization either.
Thank you, much appreciated.
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