Dreaming of the ultimate escape
A sanctuary of death
The sweet indulgence of darkness
Reaching out in the blackness
Falling to my own void
Landing in past mistakes
Swimming in my regrets
Suffocating from my sorrows
Brought down through lies and betrayal
Emptiness breaking me
Shattering the little strength left
Pushing me to extinction
A contest entry
- Another Anything At All Contest by Poetic Rage.
375 points, ended August 15, 2007, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"Brought down through lies and betrayal"
was my favorite line because i guess i can relate to it the most, so what made you write this poem?
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extremely well written piece
nicely illustrated
really draws me in
and I grasp the entity of it
you had a great sense of imagery
and language in here
beautiful poem
I really like it
keep writing -
i liked it
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