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Mirror

My
Intimate
Reflection

Reflection
Of
Reality.

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Option 4

A contest entry

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  • DancingShadowCorpse
    July 25, 2007

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    This is beautifully short and sweet. It catches my attention for this contest because. I ask what you see and you simply yet beautifully penned what you were. It gives the reader room to explore their imagination and to see what it is that comes from this piece. Generally, I am not much for short poems such as the length of yours, however, in your case.. there is an exception because I am drawn to it so. Thank you for entering!


  • Ignis Corpus
    July 19, 2007

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    this poem is short, and i think you could extend on this piece, well few words, but its is a good job though, good job and i wish you the best of luck in this contest
    beautifuldisasterxx


  • Aesthete
    June 18, 2007

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    I was almost worried no one else would enter my pitiful little contest. I must say I am certainly not displeased with this. It's terse and powerful. Probably the best short poem I've read in awhile. Thanks for entering


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 15, 2007
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    Beautiful

    reflection dear I must say I really enjoy this write a whole lot I must say. great great great


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    June 14, 2007

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    extremely well written piece
    nicely illustrated
    really draws me in
    and I grasp the entity of it
    you had a great sense of imagery
    and language in here
    beautiful poem
    I really like it
    keep writing


  • aliceramone
    June 14, 2007
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    yes the present moment is reality...and we are our own reality...well done

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