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My Cased Heart

Everywhere I go
Everyone I meet
Will become broken
It’s to be expected
Undeniable by fate
This pain is shut in
Held inside my heart
I’m so afraid to show you me
Afraid to let anyone in
I want to save the world
But I know I can’t
So for the broken hearted
Mine is on display

BY: Corey Klosterman

Author notes

this poem won't help the broken hearted. but will let them know someone out there is feeling the same way, and that they care.

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  • Artificially Yours
    June 16, 2007
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    Well I liked it.I know the feeling.


  • Broken-heart4-ever
    June 16, 2007
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    corey dose this have to do with me????


  • WolfDemon4Life
    June 14, 2007
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    Bit shaky on this one, sounded a bit like my rambling ones, But quite good


  • BlackxInk
    June 14, 2007
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    guess it's ok...

    i don't know. i've writen so many today i don't know what to think. so i guess it's ok... tell me what you think...