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Good morning, have a sentence.

The full shadow of a silver moon
rides high astride noon,
where this coffee drips,
I sip 'til then is soon;
today,
away,
someplace
in June.

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  • Sensual Sapphire
    July 19, 2007
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    Croquette mallets

    This for some reason Zak makes me think of Alice in Wonderland. Maybe it's the part about the moon riding high at noon. I love it because while making sense it all so confuses and astounds. My head is begining to ache because of all the twists this takes it on. All the thoughts that percolate like the coffee. Please tell me it's not decafe.


  • A Murderous Lament
    June 17, 2007

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    Hmmm... that's good. I like the structure and it does make sense. Great line and best of luck in the contest!

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33