Dreaming
Of travelling down to Rio
To meet those ghosts and martyrs
And fight to hold our own
Reach out
Reach out and touch these fingers
Take these hands now broken
And make me now believe
You know just what I am
Touch my heart with open hand
You know just who I'll be
By holding on to everything...
Silence
Is written in your movements
While looking for the spaces
That fill up every void
And sweep us
Sweep us all away
To other far off places
Where our music plays
You know just what I am
Touch my heart with open hand
You know just who I'll be
By holding on to everything...
You know just what I am
Touch my heart with open hand
You know just who I'll be
By holding on to everything...
Dreaming
Of travelling down to Rio
To meet those ghosts and martyrs
And fight to hold our own
Reach out
Reach out and touch these fingers
Take these hands now broken
And make a believer out of me...
Holding on to me now
Holding on to me now
Holding on to me now
Holding on to me now...
Author notes
AP name: myriad-dark Picture inspired
A contest entry
- Hands by theredcatjazzoflove.
650 points, ended June 15, 2007, 12 entries
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525 points, ended July 5, 2007, 74 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Great little read here. Good luck
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mmm, i really like these lyrics.
thanks for entering!
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Great poem! I really liked it! But remember to put your AP name and option number in your AN's or else I might have to DQ you, and I would hate to do that....
But other than that, GREAT!!!
Good luck and thanks for entering! -
removing, as this piece is already entered into several other contests
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Congrats on the honorable mention. This was not bad, however I find it very impossible for this prewrite to be picture inspired. Sorry.
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This is almost as beautiful as a song! beautiful write! I can see a lot of improvement since you first started... Nice job! Thanks for entering the contest ~ best of luck to you!
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I felt a Little Vibe......
in this write i liked the dark part you gave this write it was different from the other contestants you gave a different style in this write i really admired that.
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