It's our day and we're at the park,
sitting on the plush green grass.
Spring is in full bloom as we cuddle
close in a lovers trance.
I take your hand in mine.
The atmosphere seems to transform,
as birds serenade our point of view.
Making melodies of romance that paint
the skies iris and blue.
The sun burst into violet flames.
Life is so enchanting and you're the blame.
My eyes are fastened on you.
As the wind blows through your hair
I sip on your perfume.
Our emotions effervesce like sweethearts
on their honeymoon.
As I gaze mystically into your eyes,
on an impulse our lips entwine.
There we go again doing what we do best.
Enraptured on the Isles of passion
as we do our dance.
Your leg nestled between my thighs.
The heat of your body causes my
temperature to rise.
Intoxicated and delirious,
the loving gets serious.
I lift up your skirt,
oh my! you have no panties on.
As we frenchkiss, my erection
slides between your juicy divide.
Now I'm deep inside you and we ride,
on a merry go round.
The world begins to spin and its
so profound.
As we make ferocious love that's
sweeter than wine.
Afterwards we snuggle up close
and watch the sunset.
Holding hands in a dream like
paradise made for two,
Without a care in the world.
A contest entry
- Hands by theredcatjazzoflove.
650 points, ended June 15, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Fantastic write...One of my favorite hang-outs is a greeen, grassy park...
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wow...very spiritual experience!!! i love it.
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Leave it to you to turn the heat on! Very very nice and congrats on the on gold trophy
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I see why you won this contest now these words "Making melodies of romance that paint
the skies iris and blue." are beautiful and priceless
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The juices are running....
from my pink split lol. I must say this piece is a power drive compared to the others in the finalist list . Who ever this is you are very aggresive in this write and delivered such a shortage of breath in this piece "DAMN" now I have to re edit my finalist list great piece_hugs_
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