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Ride or Die

It is so amazing how you would ride or die for the person you love so much.
Love is unconditional you cant take away something so precious.
When things were hard he was there to hold my hand and be there for me.
He was so close to my heart!!!
My love grew stronger by day that the day's went by.
We were like bunny and clied our love could not be stoped, not even if the world ended.
When he went away i thought i lost everything but his love keep me on hold.
The night's i cried when i was only, all the lonely night's i spent alone.
Life was not always as smooth as everybody thought.
We had rocky roads, and sad times, but we made it through.
He told me that i would forever be his, his
Ride or Die chick

Author notes

Love is unconditional it can not be stoped you have to love. Love is like fire it cant be put out until the end of time or by tears

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  • New-n-Improved
    November 8, 2007

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    Just Maintain!!!

    You gotta know how to roll if you're gonna be a ride or die chick. To ride or die means you gotta know when to take the punches and keep going like a soldier. I lived a lifestyle that called for those kind of chicks because I was always in and out of jail. I needed a ride or die chick so that I could maintain knowing that someone had my back no matter what. Even if she had to do some unthinkable things for the both of us. I loved my ride or die chick because she was willing to do just about anything in order to be with me. Even if that meant that we had to not see each other for awhile.

    I like what you said in this poem because it was from the heart. This is something that you have experienced and I like how you used your honesty in this poem. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.


  • elemental angel
    July 2, 2007

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    Although I enjoyed the read there are some spelling mistakes that really threw me. Thank you so much for entering and good luck in my contest.
    Bravo