Hand in hand we walk the miles,
sometimes with laughter,
ofttimes with smiles.
Even when we are not our best,
and one or the other,
decides to test.
The love we share for so many things,
our friendship and respect,
from this it springs.
A total commitment through good and bad,
always together,
happy or sad.
I just couldnt face, not having you by my side,
I'd be a directionless man,
without any pride.
So as I hold your hand, and you hold mine,
we are together forever,
and together we shine.
A contest entry
- Hands by theredcatjazzoflove.
650 points, ended June 15, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"and so today my world it smiles
your hand in mine we walk the miles"
Led Zeppelin
But I guess it's just coincidence =P Nevertheless, if you like this poem, might just listen to this song, you'll probably like it, haha
Led Zeppelin - Thank you
Have fun, keep shining! -
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Oh, I'm well aware of Zep, didnt realize that I wrote something so close to those lyrics. But then again you can only use words in so many ways somebody, somewhere had to write something close.
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I see why you won that trophy such a beautiful poems and "I'd be a directionless man,
without any pride" and hey at least your honest -
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Thank you for your wonderfully kind comment, I appreciate it. Honesty is the best policy you know.
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Fantastic
You really did such a beautiful job with this one. Truly is amazing. Best of luck in the contest.
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Just Fucken Beautiful...
i had to add you to the finalist list you are so great at describing this story its like you made the palms make love in this write. woo i liked it dear great write
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Muah baby! Just for you.
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