I met this girl on an internet site
I read her profile, she seemed ok,
She said, "I don't want to blindly rush in"
My eyes widened, I had to reply
She replied and we have talked for hours
Shared jokes, views, have debated and wooed
Watched each other on cam; smiling away
My lust turning to infatuation day
We set a date, on which we shall meet
She'll come to my home, not even 2 weeks
Since we began talking, we haven't stopped once
We agreed this girl can stay if she wants
I am excited to think I am meeting this girl
And I have the chance to show her my world
I no longer spend my nights on my own
Watching TV, no call on my phone
My life is fulfilling, free time now has meaning
I wonder what my future will hold
This girl is hot
She'll be scorching my skin
With every touch of her hand
I just cannot wait to begin!
A contest entry
- Internet Love by joleahe.
600 points, ended June 23, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Simplicity by Flossy.
600 points, ended July 1, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Your peom is wonderful, I love how well you developed the relationship in it. Thanks for entering my contest.
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You must be very excited! This is a great poem, so full of emotion and feeling. It is so real, and so honest. I loved the part about how you now wonder about the future, and how your time has meaning.... beautiful piece. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you...
for your wonderful comments...and I can only hope the judges like it too!
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