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Gently take my Hand
Walk with me...In the Sand
So many things we need to Discuss
No need to Argue...No need to Fuss
I look into your Deep Brown Eyes
The more I want to Apologize
Past hurt, Past Pain
Looking back...what did I Gain?
When you're Upset..Baby, nothing is the same
I love the way you call my Name
Makes me Light up, Like the Hall of Fame
When I took your Hand & became your Man
Divided we Fall, but Together we Stand
I just thought that you should know
That I will never close this Door
To my Heart, Soul & Mind
Conjoined Hands Defeat all Times
This is my Apology
You can open your Eyes now so that you can see

That this is where I want to Be
As we hold hands and Understand
In the other one is a Wedding Band
Accept this as My Love Again
Secure it with a Kiss..I'm so glad we are Friends

Today is a new Day...Without your hand in mines

We could not have made it anyway

 

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  • Sedasia
    June 15, 2007

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    bond..

    love..and it's strange bonds. I love this.. it speaks of those bonds, in a strong sense. The commitment that offers stick with it.

    Beautiful


    • Ephiphany
      June 15, 2007
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      Hey Good 2 C U

      Thank you...your comments mean so much and encourages me to keep writing.
      Piff


  • cali951
    June 15, 2007

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    Wow an amazing and powerful poem I see why you won that trophy now these words right here "As we hold hands and Understand
    In the other one is a Wedding Band" awww thats just so sweet in the meaning of hands

    • Ephiphany
      June 15, 2007
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      Hey cali951

      Glad you stopped by, Thanks for such a wonderful comment and what you liked most about it. Much appreciated.
      Ephiphany


  • Poetry and I Inc
    June 15, 2007

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    Awwww, this is amazing. Damn girl. what's next from you, huh? Surprises surprises indeed sis. Loved it. Keep doing your thug thizzle Piff...lol. I know, but I had to say it La Diva. -Inc."

    • Ephiphany
      June 15, 2007
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      Awww...LaDiva 4 Ever

      You know it! Don't know what the Future holds for me sis, but you know me, I try to make the Best, cause things could be a lot different..u know. Thank you for being here for me.
      Piff


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    June 15, 2007

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    this is just beautiful...these hands shure can do a lot to people

    I see so much love in this write and I hope it will stay with you for ever and ever

    Good luck in this contest,
    XXJeannette


    • Ephiphany
      June 15, 2007
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      Thank You Diva

      Glad you liked it. So sweet of you to be here with me.
      Much
      Piff


  • HaleyMary
    June 14, 2007

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    Beautiful write. Great flow with lots of emotion. I liked the part of being divided you would fall, but together with this person you would stand. It made me think of a play on words of how society can be if we are divided in our beliefs whether about religion or a stance on the wars. I think feeling that you can be happy with a person and be together is great. Good luck in the contest.


    • Ephiphany
      June 14, 2007
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      Thank You

      I enjoy writing and I got yall to Thank for the constant Inspiration.
      Much luv,


  • Griswold
    June 14, 2007

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    The love exudes from this poem, very well written and I can tell you experience this yourself, good luck in the contest...Scott


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 14, 2007

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    wow

    a very nice matrimony piece i must say i love it. the words came straght from the muscle that pumps you didn't it? I can tell you dont even have to answer the question i feel the flames dear_love_


    • Ephiphany
      June 14, 2007
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      LoL

      Thank you...tried to hide the affection...didn't work, huh?

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