Eyes whisper words in stares
lips trace the outline of the heart,
but when two hands have touched
it is the most tender love story
of them all.
One's thumb rubbing the textures of another's skin,
saying so much in each exploring
second,
smiles say their own passionate
thank you.
Fingers clasping with more affection
tightly squeezing
as its companion replied
with equal feel.
A moment swelling in joys
needing no song,
for it sings
so richly inside.
A contest entry
- Hands by theredcatjazzoflove.
650 points, ended June 15, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such sweet tender thoughts. Now that is what love is all about,,the little things.
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Thank you so very much.
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"Eyes whisper words in stares
lips trace the outline of the heart,
but when two hands have touched
it is the most tender love story
of them all." - beauty.
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Awww, thank you for your kind comment.
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'One's thumb rubbing the textures of another's skin,
saying so much in each exploring
second,
smiles say their own passionate
thank you'
Feeling the others fingers touching...very sensual! Wonderful entry to this contest ~Sie
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Thank you. It doesn't appear to have impressed the judge though. Like that is anything new for me.
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Beautifully written of a love that needs no words to express it. I remember that feeling from long ago, the handclasp that spoke volumes without a word being said. Very well written...Scott
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.
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Wow The Hands...
cause all these heated friction than world watch out. Its very sensual and relaxing reading this piece it was well delivered and very much so well expressed I must say. you keep the picture in mind and that i liked and i most definately liked the piece_hugs_ -
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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