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Pain

My blood will run and

my pain will grow

cutting and cutting

til' I reach my soul

I'm dead inside

but alive on the out

do you care what feel,

do you really wanna know

My pain doesn't matter to

you or my friends

My pain just gets bigger

til' it reachs the end

cutting and cutting

I just cant stop

I wish I could die

cause I'm already dead

I will grab that knife

and stab it through me

and kill myself

I'll be as happy

as can be

All my pain will gone and

I will feel better

image that feeling

it's like a warm sweater

Here i go to that wonderful knife

I'm going to die and

end my life! 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • cupcakecultx33
    November 17, 2007
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    Very heart-wrenching.


  • r a w r
    October 17, 2007
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    i can relate. well done.


  • she still smiles x gold member
    August 5, 2007

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    beautiful!

    omg this poem was AMAZING. i can really understand how you feel, the emotion just radiates from the words you chose. i can relate to this poem...=[ i read your about me kind of thing or whatever and i see that you said that cutting was your way of escaping...well, it's mine, too. just know you aren't alone, as silly as that may sound. anyway, this poem is beautiful, thank you for sharing it. you will be able to reach out to a lot of teens through your writing...:] keep it up. hope we can become friends!

    <3


  • nevergoingback
    June 29, 2007
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    Yet Another Great poem By Emo-21

    Like all your other poems i really get what you were feeling when you wrote it. I find our poems to be simalair as in the sense that in the end your always dead.


  • silentlyscreaming.
    June 23, 2007

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    this is really good, though sad. i know exactly how you feel. my favorite part is
    My blood will run and

    my pain will grow

    cutting and cutting

    til' I reach my soul

    I'm dead inside

    but alive on the out


  • a dying soul x
    June 15, 2007
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    woah
    i like this
    it has true meaning and deep
    keep it up

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