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dandelion



little mane
fiery strands tickle
    my feet


slender olive
    neck?
    body?
stem



reach up to the sun
and like the weed you are
growgrowgrowgrowgrow




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  • Wonderwhenitllrain
    June 22, 2007
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    Awww, this is cute, short, but good.
    I enjoyed reading this, almost comical.
    Great job!


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 16, 2007

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    Thank you for the title, or I would have had to guess, lol. Correct answer, cute little poem.

    Thank you for entering
    Storm