Her soft hands
His rough hands
from callouses after
all these years of hard work
Are entwined together
He loves her soft hands
She loves his rough hands
as they join together
hand in hand
A contest entry
- Hands by theredcatjazzoflove.
650 points, ended June 15, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hand in Hand of Wow
Hand In Hand,Beautiful about the love between two lovers,thank you and good luck!
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This capture....
reality of the realness of con jointing hands very beauty art work in this write i love it its more on the reality side. -
Awwwwww, beautifully said. This is a love that is eternal, it reminds me of my folks. My Dad always worked, Mom never did, the rough and smooth...Scott
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Great right. Simple but great. Good luck in the contest.
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