You know your life is good when
You see laughter in his eyes.
You know your life is good when
You look around and can see the family ties.
You know your life is good when
You’re happy to get up each morning.
You know your life is good when
All if takes is a look for your heart to melt.
You know your life is good when
The answer is always simple.
You know your life is good when
He smiles so wide you can see his dimple.
You know your life is good when
All the love you feel is trying to escape.
You know your life is good when
To you the world is perfect
Even though it’s really not.
Author notes
tut tut tut mr host. not all teens are into the sticky caps thing.. and i highly doubt its only just teens who do it!! lol
heres hoping this is sorta what your looking for
Its almost 6am here and ive been up all night .. ehheeh. no coffeeeeeeeeee. lol.
Claire-Anne
A contest entry
- You Know Your Life Is Good When... by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended June 16, 2007, 22 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great bit of writing:
You know your life is good when
The answer is always simple.
You know your life is good when
He smiles so wide you can see his dimple.
i loved this it spoke to me and such lovely flow, and a nice dark twist at the end good work. -
I HATE STICKY CAPS!! And I love you because you don't use them. Congratul-ama-lations on the Bronze my dear!! This is great, I loved every word and I'm going to give you some clappy dudes for this one.
Love ya hunni
Your fave bandaid... LOL
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Wow. Powerful, and oh so adorable. Lol. I was entranced immediately. The ending made me sad though, and a whirlwind of thoughts went through my head. I may just have to write a poem to get them out. Lol.
Good job in the contest.
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cute!
this is really cute n also so true
lov ya -
very nice
thank you so much for this read it was wonderfully light and refreshing and summerly crisp keep writing and ill keep reading .good luck in your contest -
my compliments to you... you make a very good point it is not always the teens but 99% of the entires I got from previous contests turne dout to be them sorry I meant no offense. any ways now as far as your entry goes it is very well penned. I really must also admit I was fooled I had you pegged as an older person becaus eof the way the depth ad flow went and I never sen such a deep writye from a tene. any ways this is a very well penned entry that fits nicely best of luck to yas and take care
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Wow, thank you very much for the comment. I dont think anyone has thought of me as an older person beacuse of the way i write.
But i can understand that mostly its the teens who use sticky caps - just not all of them, and just not only them. hehehe.
Anyways- i wish you the best of luck judging this contets... hehehe
Claire-Anne
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