To me, you’re my heart
My theology that I don’t embrace
My one true love
My first passionate kiss
You are the biggest part
You are full of grace
You remind me of a beautiful dove
You are pure like a winter’s bliss
One that will touch me
One that will stay with me
One that will save me
One that will give my life
I give you all I have
I give all my love
I give my life
I give it all
Just to make you blissful
♥
A contest entry
- MOST IMPROVED POET! ANYTHING~ EVERYTHING by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended July 5, 2007, 74 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Come on, love, cliche or not by Cool.Indifference.
400 points, ended July 15, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Helping Me Out by ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-.
535 points, ended July 22, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The very best you have (ROUND 1) by Xgeekdreamgonewrong.
340 points, ended August 12, 2007, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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humm very good, wasnt exactly what i was looking for,, but it was really deep and well written..
thank you and good luck kaydee -
Yes this is really nice improvement from your 1st one~ Your wording and flow mainly I see the most improvement! Nice job! Thanks for entering the contest ~ best of luck to you!
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WOW, it was very well written and full of passion and love and i think i konw who it is about... ME of course lol but anyway, it was good!
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Thanks
Yeah there was a lot of passion and love put in to the poem and im glade that it came out in it. and im glade that you liked it.
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