Take me away
To the place where once upon a time I was happy.
You were happy with me.
We were on our own and in total bliss.
You have a way to take me…
I just need you to try.
I need you to make me believe
And I need you to believe in us.
First you need to allow me back into your life
Tell me you love me,
Hug me until we melt as one,
Kiss my until my lips go numb
Second you need to feel the love
You need to know I love you and I need to feel yours too
We smile and just stare into each other’s eyes
And everything else around us disappears…
And the last thing you need to do…
Give into the temptation…
Let’s go to that world without worrying what we’re leaving behind
If only for a while
I think we can put our lives on hold for a while
Just go to that wonderful relaxing place
Be together again
And forget about our problems
If only for a night…
Author notes
This "other world" that I talk about in this poem is how I feel when I'm with my boyfriend. We're having some hard times right now and going through a somewhat temporary break up and yeah... I just wish to be back...
Just some fantasy type stuff...tryin something new
Comments
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Nice
I like the way you have laid your words out. Each seems to have been very well thought out. The flow is also nice, i like how the poem rolls off the tip of my tongue. As for the imagery, very nice but a bit lose.
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