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No Matter What

Today I wait for you.
Tonight I cry for you.
Tommorow I'll die for you.

Every little thing mattered to you.
No matter what I did
    I was never good enough.

Your mother loved me,
  but you did not.

I was mean to everyone but you
And when I tried to be nice you hated me.

When you were mean to me.
I could only ignore you.

I could never hit you.
I could never hate you.
So I'll just die for you.

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  • Flowergirl
    September 16, 2008
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    wow very sad but i loved it sorry to hear it was never good enough i was the same way a few years ago only i was nice to every one but him he really wasnt right for me and this one doesnt seem right for you move on and love your best...keep up the good write i love it...


  • Simply a Memory
    June 14, 2007

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    Thats interesting, but sadly I've been there before. So I was able to relate to it. I enjoyed it, you are very talented.
    -Stormy-


  • the-gifted
    June 14, 2007

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    aww that is very sad. it is an emotional piece. you did a very good job with this. i think it flowed perfectly and i think that it was just wonderful. great job.


  • Melodies
    June 14, 2007

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    Oh... this poem is absolutely splendid!

    I really do appreciate your honesty and heart that is found in these lines! This poem whispers out a lot of hurt but does it in a beautiful way!