Life gave me one last time to talk to you.
Even though i thought that god was being unfair,
I was just being selfish to spend a life time with you.
We were not prosmised a life time with you how can we live, sleep, talk, feel loved without you near.
One last time can we have the love we once shared.
Can we have the smile and good time's that we shared with each other once more.
God took you away on May 30, but he sent you as a pride and joy of this earth.
When you were born it was a great day to come once more.
You were destined for great things.
So now that you are gone can i have that dance
One last time
Author notes
Kierrya Isaac Life is not promised to all and none at all but live it to the fullest and just be you.
Option2, to worry, is tyo love, worry, super-scurry, and just love me.
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel... by KittieLyyn.
360 points, ended June 24, 2007, 39 entries
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very cool. short but nice.
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i still need you to put your name and option.
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The poem is about life love and what is so precious to yo
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Put the things i have asked for in your author comments or I will disqualify you. (I like this poem, and don't want to DQ you)
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