He watched her whilst she slept,
as ever, utterly captivated by her beauty,
thoughts and pulse racing,
he slid his hand across her stomach.
She awoke with a smile,
encountering no resistance, his hand moved higher,
gently stroking and massaging her breasts,
closing her eyes slowly, she inhaled deeply.
Moving closer, he softly kissed her neck,
an excited smile briefly crossing his lips
as an involuntary gasp of pleasure escaped her,
he lingered a few moments before moving lower.
His lips brushed ever so lightly against her nipple,
his warm breath on her flesh building anticipation
before he took her bud between his lips and gently sucked,
a more urgent groan escaped her as she tensed and arched under him.
He continued his journey, down lower,
he could feel her breathing quicken
as he kissed, running his tongue down her stomach,
her legs parting, encouraging him further.
He gratefully accepted her invitation
as he moved down towards her,
her scent intoxicated him,
his own breath now racing and heart pounding.
Without hesitation he pushed his tongue between her lips,
excited by the warm wetness he found,
his tongue quickly found its intended target,
making lazy figure-eights back and forth.
She cried aloud in ecstasy, her legs spreading wider,
opening herself deeper for him,
thrusting her hips forward
as she arched her back further, grabbing hold of the headboard.
Lost in passion and breathing hard
he probed far deeper and faster,
synchronizing each thrust of his tongue
to her every gasp and moan.
As passion was reaching its height,
she lifted his head away,
looking deep into his eyes:
“Now!” she whispered, nodding her head eagerly.
She reached down between his legs
grasping him urgently,
drawing him towards her
as he rose above her.
She moved him into position,
but he hesitated at first,
letting the tip of his manhood
just graze gently against her.
Their eyes locked for several long moments
as anticipation reached unbearable levels,
he finally gently pressed his hips forward,
sliding slowly and effortlessly deep inside.
They both let out cries of infinite pleasure,
filled with mutual longing and desire,
he managed to keep enough composure
to rock his hips back and forth slowly at first.
But the moans and breathing were coming faster
and with that his thrusts became more urgent,
for a second he withdrew, pausing before thrusting in again deep,
her cry at the sensation a barely muffled scream.
With that, there eyes once again met,
without one word needing to be said,
they both knew as they looked deep inside each other,
that it was time.
She rose up to meet his quickening thrusts,
wrapping his arms around her, he lost control,
with a growl he exploded hard inside her,
as she came, the breath from her moans tingling his ear.
They lay side by side
looking at each other,
both fully spent and content
as the high slowly ebbed away.
It was in that moment
that he spoke to her,
his very first words
since awaking that morning.
“I love you”.
She looked deeply into his eyes and smiled.
Author notes
This one was inspired and instigated by Ocean Soul Raven's last piece - Passion's Heat (Go check it out).
This is my very first piece of erotica and it was very hard (pardon the pun) for me. I could have written a more fantasy piece, but I thought as I had never done one before, I thought I would stick to the tried and trusted route of personal experience.
And this is a very personal experience that did happen. It is a great memory, but, with current personal circumstance, it is also very hard, painful and raw to remember, especially as I still feel the same way.
But, oh well.....here it is.
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Please tell me what you think
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I really enjoyed reading this piece, some of the lines were a little long in comparison to the others, but other than that you have a great poem. Thank you for your entry in my contest and good luck.
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Thank you very much. It's just the way this one flowed out, I couldn't see how to cut it down, nor was sure if I wanted to.
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Wow.....
That was good...well written.
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Sorry for the long delay in replying. Thanks. Though not strictly as "poetic" in the eyes of many people, it was fun to write.
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wowwww
this was the most realistic love making poem i have ever read!!
I could picture it all in my mind!
You are extremely talented with words!
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Thank you very much. I revisit this piece and re-read it every now and then. It means more to me than some other pieces due to the subject matter and circumstance.
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i would like to thank you so very much for this wonderful entry into the contest for david. i know that he will very much enjoy reading this. i wish you all the best of luck in this contest and in your future writings. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you. Sorry I didn't get around to replying, I don't know how I missed this comment.
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Well, this is the running definition for passion, I suppose hahaha thanks for your entry into my contest lol
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Many thanks. This piece was difficult for me at the time, but now things are changed, I can enjoy it far more.
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well that is very good it's good to see how things change, and for the better
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Oh this was amazing. It was so sensual and erotic, yet a beauty within that holds so much passion and emotion. This was a wonderful write, and kept me interested the whole time, and I must say.. it is hot!! Also, since it is a personal experience, it must have been really hard to write, but it's good to get it out and express it to others that might be in similar positions. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you. It was very difficult to not only write, but also to read at the time that I wrote it,due to it being a personal experience and it brought back the memories and it was very painful, however, as I have said elsewhere, things have turned around completely since then and no longer in the same situation anymore, so I tend to have a wee read at it every now and then lol.
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A perfect level of eroticness. A beautiful ending. I enjoyed the read, Thank you and Good Luck
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Thank you, this was my first attempt at erotica, and I haven't written another one since (apart from a haiku chain, but that was more lighthearted than outright erotic). I really didn't want to over-do it and be too descriptive, at least in the choice of the wording anyway.
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Well written and quite a spicy read!
Thank you for entering,
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Thank you very much. It is fun re-reading it (not as much fun as the actual experience was, of course...)
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a seduction of maddness in total exctasy full of passion and delight.
good job
Tamara
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Thank you. This was my first "erotic" write and was written at a time not long after I split with my partner and I found it hard to read. We are back together now, though and I no longer have that problem.
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Very beautiful and intimate. This was a great piece (pardon the pun??) and I thought you wrote it well. Write on!
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Thank you. Erotica is a subject matter I had never ventured into before, so I was quite pleased it turned out quite well for a first attempt.
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Now this one was nice and hot and certainly gets you thinking about the good old intimate moments. Ahh, last weekend... Hmmm, I can still smell him on me. Guilt and shame and pleasure and need all fill me now.
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Sorry for taking so long replying. It can be good to reflect on the good times, though at the moment it is still very close for me and very hard. As for you feeling guilt and shame....don't ever feel guilt or shame for anything that you truly feel.
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What a wonderfully written poem I commend you for your courage on sharing something that is still so painful and thank you for sharing it at the same time - it was an intense emotive write and I enjoyed every line - well done!
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Sorry for taking so long to reply. Thank you. I found it surprisingly easy to write, however, especially now, I am finding it far harder to read.
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very erotic. Genuine and tht is the best part of it. all smiles here. my favorite line is this:Making lazy figure-eights back and forth, very methaphoric. i sensed the infinite pleasure....as infinite as universe..as infinite as number. beautifully done. i am glad tht u are willing to share a personal experience here, and tht had made all the difference in this poem....genuine...and haunting. im not an applaud-giving person..but for this i will.
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Sorry for being so late in replying, thank you very much. I agree with your assessment of it being haunting, it is a good memory but at the moment it is a bit torturous.
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*fans self*
Hell... I'm just gonna put myself in the freezer now and hopefully get cooled off some. It's that or I go for Zamboni droppings across the street.
Excellent job! 'Course I'll have to get even *weg*
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You'll need to keep an eye on the compressor on that freezer, you'll burn it out, its been seeing a lot of action lately.
Get even? Aaaaaaaah g'wan then. I'll just have to hit you back with a fantasy piece with a different focus as the main subject matter then.
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