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Timelock

Come forth and speak with me.
Meet me in the sun.
There is so much to say,
But words alone shall not encompass this feeling.

Think with me.
Tell me your dreams, your thoughts, your beliefs.
These shape the person
Amd without them
Your colors would fade.

Dance with me
Through a galaxy of infinite possibilities.
Kick off your shoes
Join me on the floor
And please:

Leave all preconceptions at the door.

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  • strangerforeigner
    February 4, 2008

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    I like this. Great imagery.


  • i write passion
    June 19, 2007

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    Hi,
    The title is tremendous . I was tempted by the title alone . If it wud have been a one word contest that wud have been enuf
    and the last line is so true . Whether there be thousands of poets or dearth, preconceptions lurk in the readers mind , most of the time , and even the fact remains that writers tend to become monotonous .
    Nice one . and all the best in round one