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Dreamers' Disease

Tonight the dead dance
around their dizzy darkness
Defiled deformed dreams



Dust from the dreamers' disease

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  • sheltered
    June 20, 2007
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    D-alliterated


  • guttermouthxgirl
    June 14, 2007

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    Wow... You are good at these eh?

    Wow you continue to amaze me with your knowledge of writing poetry. This is really good and even though it is so short, the first line gave me an image of dead dancing... it was wierd but enjoyable. Keep on writing

    Nikole