Tiny
creatures
strong enough to lift
our souls with
song
In a list
A contest entry
- 10 Beautiful Words # 5 by Harrisham Minhas.
300 points, ended June 15, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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that's beautiful! and so true, i wish i thought of it!!
i can't think of anything else to say except beautiful! you've brought a smile to my face, thanks -
Wonderful! This is very well written.
Thanks for your entry. Good luck in my contest.
Harrisham Minhas
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i must say i'm suprised! i didn't think i would like it, after all its very short. but everytime i read it i get the power of the few words you put. i really like it and it describes birds perfectly, they are more than little guys, more than what they seem.
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Ah, but the contest calls for 10 words!! Glad you like it anyway and many thanks for taking time to comment
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A really big fortune in a very small cookie! Your tiny poem is also strong enough to lift the weight of a heavy heart.
David
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