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Shot Down

I thought I had a chance, I thought yes
I asked you out, you said no

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i hope this is any good, i'm not sure.
after contest is over, whether i win or not, i'll probably make this much longer, or make this 2 lines into the theme.

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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 14, 2007
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    Wonderful. Good luck.


  • shuvi
    June 14, 2007

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    WOW!! absolute total wow! yayayayay, the entries here are hilarious! fab write!
    btw, dont worry, i wont say no..lol
    Thanks for entering, best of luck in the contest, lots and lots of love and cheers, shuvi