Look at daddy bounce,
Down so many stairs!
I'm laughing so hard,
Because no one else cares
He's lucky, this is the worst I'll do,
'If you hit me again, I'll KILL YOU!'
I tell him, eye to eye.
If daddy touches mommy again, daddy's gonna die!
I tell my siblings this, in earnest.
I will kill daddy, (he's not really mine...)
I'll throw his remains, in our furnace!
I can live life, daddyless, and be just fine!
Oh this truly becomes a pain,
Daddy's gone, and hit mommy, again,
Now I have to stab him,
Darn!
What a shame...
He's a total ogre!
The police will have nobody to blame...
It really is sad that it came to this,
From over my head, I tossed you down...
Daddy, is that a scowl,
Or a cowardly, womanly, frown..
Daddy, your fear smells foul!
You could have lived life, happily here,
If you hadn't drunk so many beers.
I hated it when you got that way.
At least I'm here to stay...
Daddy, I'll watch your casket lower,
With a tearful smile, and a small wave...
But tommorrow when your gone and buried,
I'll be back, to piss on your grave.
Author notes
Well, I don't suppose this will win me anything in this contest, i'm pretty sure it wasn't quite goofy enough, but i'f i'm wrong, then more power to the judges of this here shindig..lol.. basically it's what i wish i could do , to my still living bastard of a stepdad.. oh well
A contest entry
- Ace's "Truly in bad taste" contest. by AceOSpades.
900 points, ended July 3, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love it! Its sad though but very good, my favorite part is the end.
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i love the end. it's like, "yeah, i'll act sad, but inside i'm laughing!"
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This Has Got Some Heat!
Oooo!
Daddy Watch Out!
Girl I don't even want to get you cranked at this point - WOW! Down the stairs, into the furnace and then piss on the poor ol'guys grave.
I think you've got what it takes in this contest!
Good Luck!
Tang
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lol, great closing.
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thanks for you comment ^_^
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No problem
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Awesome. But the woman shouldn't've stayed w/the guy in the 1st place.
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hmm
some people don't have a choice at the time..
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Well, I do find it kinda funny with the smiley sur background and all, the bouncing daddy down the stairs is irreverent enough, the pissin on the grave was a great touch
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heh ^_^ glad you were amused..i certainyl was when i wrote it
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aaaaahahahahaha right on! This is a tight write! I like it! Push that Bastard down the stairs. The ending... pissing on his grave... that def. closed the deal. lol
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teeheee ^_^
hey pretty lady, what's a nice girl like you doing commenting a bad poem like this? xD lol, thanks for the comment i'm glad that all i do amuses you xD
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