I am a ship, without you I just float.
Like a canvas sail you move me.
Deep inside of my heart and make me want you even more.
Like the stars at night you help me navigate.
Through the times we find it hard to see each other.
Like a carpenter you repair me when im damaged.
Especially when its been a rough day.
Like the crew you make me feel like I can do it all.
The way you talk to me and make me believe I can make it.
More than that though you are my captain.
Without you there would be no heart to me.
Just a wooden hulk rotting away in port.
Exsisting but never truely living.
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This is me and my girlfriend Kristine.
Please tell me what you think
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" there is love in the air"!!! AWWW That is so sweet this Kristine girl seems lucky!! Well keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime!!!
Jess
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Sounds to me like someone is absolutely in 'love' ... this is beautiful and stunning ... she is one lucky girl ... I love the way you put so much emotion and effort into this piece ... this is how i can tell u love her ... you are just an absolute wonderful poet ... and she is one lucky girl ... hope she knows what she has got ... cause if I were her, I wouldn't let you slip away ... not again anyway
I miss you
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i like it a lot
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Wiiiam this is a sweet poem. I am happy for you.
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americanrebel
Good Job dude. She is a beautiful young lady. Congrats I hope it lasts a lifetime.
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Beautiful write Reb. Your writing keeps getting better and better. The only mistake was "exsisting" b/c it should be existing. Your picture is too cute. And great title, it was so creative.
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You have grown as a young man and as a poet my dear Will
I commend you on this write! This is by far onw of the best poems you have written! I do believe you have found your muse in Love!!!! She is adorable and you are a very handsome couple. I hope she likes this as much as I did 
Peace and Love always
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this is a really sweet poem will
~*~Sasey~*~
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