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BDSM is More

There's more to it
Than simple domination
There's more than just giving orders
And expecting them to be obeyed

There's more to it
Than simple submission
There's more than just obeying commands
And bowing to someone's will

Strength
Honor
Courage
Respect
Trust
Dedication

The strength to give up control
The honor to admit ones faults
The courage to rid each other of those faults
The respect of a person's limits
The trust to give yourself to someone or to take control of someone
The dedication to care for a person's every needs

There's more to it than pain
Turning into pleasure
More than whips and chains
And fucking machines

There's more to it than dungeons
And Masters and Mistresses
And Slaves and Pets

There's more than blood
Mixed with sweat
And screams of pain
And moans of pleasure


BDSM is more

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  • Selestial
    March 8
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    BDSM is so much more, and you say it beautifully! Wonderful work!


  • Tattboy silver member
    November 20, 2008

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    You are absolutely right, BDSM is so much more!

    Well done on a very thoughtful and affecting poem.


  • slipperssun gold member
    June 14, 2007

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    wow this is stunning and so true... there is such a depth of feelings and love that go hand in hand with BDSM... well done on making more aware...
    cheers
    jen


  • Tattboyspet
    June 14, 2007

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    I couldn't agree with you more!
    BDSM is something that runs so much deeper than mere love (from 'society's' point of view) - it is absolute, unconditional and oh, so fulfilling!
    This is a wonderful write on something that is lived to the core if one is in a relationship like this.
    The title says it all: "BDSM is More" - in EVERY aspect (well, according to this slave anyway )