Fortunate doxy that carps of broken flight,
Make low your words to strike the heart of compassion!
Deny your hand in demons, conforming--
Shirk what truth you claim needs me!
To soothe the wounds left in errant rot;
Which burns away the wings so given.
Refute my words, ignorant child!
What vile wrongs will you partake?
Mendacious moll: my frivolous grace;
By such fallacy this venom streams.
Let each drop burn the flesh--
Every ounce sweet hearts arrest!
Word upon word, these whispers flow,
I will not pause--rest but a wink--
'Til emptiest nothing stands long forgotten.
I shall mete out every pound once delivered;
All for such foolishness by you.
Author notes
I'll bet no one knows what this really means. e_e
For some those that don't know some of these words...
Doxy--immoral woman
Carp--complain sourly
Shirk--evade
Mendacious--false or untrue
Moll--doxy
Fallacy--misleading notion
http://dictionary.com
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Comments
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I like this, but I feel it could have been alot better in some parts is easily understood words were used, just because it seems a little akward. I love the ending, my favourite bit, I feel it left a powerful note.
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