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I'm such a fool

You know I'm such a fool,
For you see, I have no clue.
But just so that you know,
I'm such a fool for you.


Author notes

I will see the movie 'In Bruges' in 2008 when it's released

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  • bethan-gaze
    June 23, 2007
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    Short and concise but at the same time ... loaded. I love this type of poem.


  • Morgaine
    June 18, 2007

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    I love it that you've kept it short, I can always appreciate short poems! You got the point across well and sticked to the rules - thanks for entering and good luck!