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Savoring the Moment

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Lay down beside me

Hold me close, my heart

needs to hear the beating of yours

I want to inhale your breath

to be one with you

 

Your kisses intoxicate me

leaving me aching for your touch

Reaching for me, stroking my hair

you search my eyes

becoming aware of the fire

you have ignited

 

My body begs for you

to take me there

That place where there is no space or time,

only us, two glistening and wanting bodies

 

We abandon all of our uncertainties

from a deep well of longing and need

We greedily drink the wine of our lust

Your essence seeping through your

skin into me

 

Moaning my name, with every breath

that slips into your chest

I breath you in through the pores of my

love quenched skin

 

Feel my body crying for you

as our tongues probe secret places

Our passion caught on the cutting edge

 

I want to feel the fire

I want to feel the burn

Trapping your fire inside me

as  you push your love inside me

 

The world slips away as we dance in the fire

steady and unyielding, we seek to quench

this hunger and thirst

Surrounding me and filling me

we move with one final and breaking thrust

 

Our screams echoing through the room

Together, one mind, one soul

existing in this moment forever 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Knight70
    July 23, 2007

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    beautiful, erotic......

    I'm going to get writing sensual poetry down one of these days. Your work is so inviting to a novice poet like myself.


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 20, 2007

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    So Beautiful

    Good Morning Soulful Woman, Very sensual poem you have penned here. Done in very good taste. A pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing with us. Take care, Sandy

  • Laura
    June 17, 2007

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    ohhhh Nor i say, this is outstanding. i think i want a piece of you inspiration hehe very well done indeed love xxx


  • Lonewolf2008 gold member
    June 15, 2007

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    awww how sweet the moments of ecstasy of love and passion. loving.


  • soulfultia gold member
    June 15, 2007

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    A tastefully penned sensual/erotic piece. I usually don't read these much, but you did a nice job with this and your flow and rhythm were awesome, just led us right through the penning Good work! My pleasure to read ~tia

  • Colin OBrien
    June 14, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Wonderful write


  • Amera gold member
    June 13, 2007

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    Oh dear... I love your erotic writes.

    A little too much information: you're a screamer huh?

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 13, 2007

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    Good Write

    you are so gifted with these words in this piece. this is my first time reading your work but you have impressed me with these lyrics i must say.

  • Lord Merlynn
    June 13, 2007

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    this is a very nicely written piece. I love the imagery, and the word usage. Great job, and good luck in my contest.
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